My first draft of And Then There Where None was not bad in content, however the spelling through out the story wasn't the best. Another thing I had to change were the words that autocorrect changed. For me the most productive thing we did was when we had peer editing in class. I enjoyed this because you got to read others papers and see how they interpreted the story. This also allowed me to get a different view on how to write the essay. The other reason I enjoyed the peer editing was because they knew what was needed in the essay to get all the points and could easy understand the story. In the future I hope that we will be able to do other peer edits and I think It might be interesting for us to post a draft on the blog and have others comment on thing that should be improved on. This year I hope that I get better at varying my sentence’s and word choice.
